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This Is What I've Been Through
Author: KitKatrina

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Emotions gone wild,
I set them all free,
I feel like a child,
No responsibility,
Too much to deal,
Itís all too much,
Too much is real,
Iím losing touch,
Memories erased,
Time has passed,
The sour bitter taste,
Just wonít last,
Smiles donít exist,
My heart still aches,
Someoneís missed,
Memories erased,
A flow of tears,
A mournful scream,
I have no fears,
Nothings in me,
Empty is all I am,
I am not a whole,
I donít think I can,
Rebuild this soul,
Losing a dear friend,
To the popular crowd,
I never saw the end,
Because I was too proud,
Impatient, I donít care,
Angers building up,
No one is there,
Anger might corrupt,
Pain is all I feel,
Furious inside,
How does one deal,
When no ones on their side,
Help is truly needed,
So I pity myself,
I have not succeeded,
To become someone else,
Iím intoxicated to hurt,
That is what I do,
Iíve been kicked into the dirt,
This is what Iíve been through.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Silkened Moon (206.214.64.75) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 04:19 pm

Totally Awesome!

I loved this one Kit Katrina, I loved the choice of words, especially the very first stanza. I loved it all! It was very beautiful and lovely! Great job!
Sarah Taurus (64.57.108.40) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 07:23 pm

Gucci

Hey Gucci "kitkatrina", I loved this poem... it's feeled with lots of emotion and thought.. I really enjoyed this one ... and many more of your great poems... I love you and maybe I can come over later or something k ... bye -Chanel
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 02:59 am

Silkened Moon

Thank you for the wonderful comment. When I wrote this poem I was filled with mixed emotions and feelings, so I put them all in one. I didn't really mind if it didn't make sense because it was very therapeutic and it sounded profound. Thanks again! ~Trina
 
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