Tiumphant Day
Author: Capricorn


A rooster crows and prompts the sun to rise.
He stretches out bestirring arms and braids
his crimson ribbons through the purpling skies,
creating tapestries in lustrous shades.

While Zephyr breathes, caressing leaves awake,
the sparrows wing and twitter melodies.
Then tongues of fire lick the sky, to break
across the azure hues of earth’s reprise.
When dew is sprinkled over fields, it clings
like moistened lace, exuding earth’s bouquet.
Creation beats it’s rhythm; nature sings
her lively chorus, stirring dawn’s array.

As earth’s crescendo peaks, a warmth is spread;
the sun now leaps triumphant from his bed.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Monday, May 31 2004, 04:50 pm


Absolutely amazing Capricorn! I wish my poems were just like yours! You're a role model in the poetry field. I love your similes, metaphors and.... it's very unique the way you express your poetry, and work of art.... I love the way the paintbrush forms your beauty in this poem! This is a wonderful, triumphant day! Very good Cap!

barb ( -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 03:59 am


gosh you're good. It was over my head.but beautiful choices of words describing things.
Capricorn ( -- Wednesday, June 2 2004, 11:17 pm

Hi meridian

Thanks for your very kind comments and I am so glad you enjoyed
Capricorn ( -- Wednesday, June 2 2004, 11:19 pm

Hi Barb

It's taken me so long to write this -- most of it's over my head too... LOL!!

Thanks Barb
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