Author: Lonlyrockstar


Spirits are all around us
Controling our every move
Darkness is overrising us
Light is soon to be demolished
darkness has came in all directions
leaving the light to happiness
kids no longer playing
parents no longer partying
everything is silent
nothing lurking the streets
no criminals or murders out tonight
just peace and quiet
now that the spirits have taken over
there's nothing to worry about
for the spirits has taken over
and light is no longer out


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to dum to think of a name ( -- Friday, December 13 2002, 01:45 pm

Hey it

Love the poem dude. it so sweet. groovy!!
Anonymous ( -- Friday, May 30 2003, 02:18 pm


you are too dum to think of a retard...j/k oh i love your poem...keep up the great up...peace
lonly teen ( -- Saturday, November 1 2003, 07:46 pm


that is so true its like sometimes u can feel the spirits go right threw u
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