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Hurt You
Author: Lynn

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I see i made you cry
Not because i told a lie
Was it that I said goodbye
Or was it that I forgot to say hi
Never wanted to hurt you

I want so bad to dry your tears
Help you end all your fears
Make things right that went so wrong
Make your life anything but a country song
Never wanted to hurt you

Maybe it would be best if I left you
Possibly then your dreams would come true
With me no longer being around
There should be no reason for you to frown
I'm just trying not to hurt you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Friday, December 6 2002, 02:13 am

Question....

Misty??? Just wondering. (love ya)
anonymous (68.111.205.147) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 09:18 pm

no title

I know exactly how you feel and I did the same but it backfired. O well.
crazy gal (216.125.49.252) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 07:03 pm

crys

i am hurting right now so much that i want to die. i like this guy but i can't talk to him.. and i don't noe wat to do.
Martin Vann (63.208.60.160) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 07:56 pm

If you want love, try this...,

Just smile and say, hell-o and mean it! If, there is an interest, you won't have to do a thing, if there is an interest, the "smile," will come back to you.

Point, don't ever push it, its there, or its not, (Usually, think..., I just blew away my own advice?}

This reply is for those tender hearts, who desire that the warmth they have to share, seek, its return. Just don't push, its there or it isn't (usually, there, I said it again.}

Excellent work Lynn, a thought pro-vo-ker. Seizure could do a good reply on this one, guess he hasn't read it, or perhaps, decided to keep his thoughts to himself. I only mention Seizure out of respect for him.

MartinV

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