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Precious Little Hearts
Author: Ben Laney

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Angel's in the bedroom
Packing a bag with clothes
She wants to go with Dad
Singing down the road
Little Sis is fast asleep
Bottle clenched in her hand
The rythym of her breathing
Is music to this man

They know just what to say
To make me jump through hoops
They may drive me crazy
Before this day is through
And they will dance and laugh
How did they get so smart?
They have got my number
These precious little hearts

Precious little hearts
They know just how to
Take their Dad apart
Do they know they are
They are God's
Greatest works of art
These precious little hearts
Sweet, sweet
Precious little hearts

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie (65.148.209.143) -- Sunday, June 29 2003, 02:06 am

Heart warming

BEN... YOU REALLY CAN PUT YOUR HEART INTO YOUR POEMS...AWESOME....YOUR KIDS ARE EXTREMELY LUCKY THAT YOU CAN EXPRESS SO FREELY..THIS IS THE ONLY WAY I CAN MAKE CONTACT.. YOUR E-MAIL KEEPS GETTING RETURNED..WELL HOPE TO SEE YOU SOON..K.I.T
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Sunday, June 29 2003, 05:59 pm

Very Expressive, and Nice. :)

Ben, that poem touches me very much. It reminds me of my relationship with my father, and the past that led me here today. And I bet my father would agree with me, on saying that you did very nicely. Good job!! :)
Brenda Michelle (152.163.252.165) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 03:07 pm

wow

what can i say that hasnt been said! you really put your heart into your poetry. it is so wonderful that you can express yourself like that.
GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
~Leah~ (66.222.217.200) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 03:16 am

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Nice poem here. It touched my heart
Ben (67.122.250.227) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 05:54 pm

Terrie*, Crimson Angel, Brenda Michelle and Leah

I want to thank each and everyone of you for your very beautiful comments on Precious Little Hearts. I do really appreciate them a lot! And, I apologize for taking so long to respond to your very encouraging words here on a writing that is very dear to me. This one is on my first CD, "My Crazy Dreams", which is dedicated to my children. Seeing these does my heart some good. I am soooo glad you like this and I am touched by the generousity of your praise! Thanks again! ***Ben
 
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