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Do It Again
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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I liked it when we became good friends
Hey, let's do it all over again.....

Let's share our secrets
And never any lies
To see what surfaces
The second time

Shall we go back
To so long ago
And re-discover
What we didn't know

Maybe look at the stars
To reveal our hearts
Or walk in the rain
Over & over again.....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.214.205) -- Thursday, October 16 2003, 04:27 am

Nice touch ...Pam

i really liked the style of this one..i hear the 2nd time is a winner..Good Luck....
Ashley (172.19.219.127) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 05:31 pm

I like...

I like this poem alot. I wish that i could give it to some of my friends but then that would be wrong since someone else wrote it. Again i like your poem.
 
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