I'll Come For You
A whistle's in the air, descend the shades of night
Everybody wants to know what is wrong or right
I just got your note that you had to leave
That your family left, and you were forced to grieve
No one really knows just what this meant to me
But there is a way to set our spirits free
I'd traverse the planes of reality
I'd give up Heaven to keep you with me
No one really knows the right things to do
And all you can know is what your heart tells you
I know that I will never do you wrong
And I know that for you I can be strong
Just give me the time while I search for you
And give me the time while I prove I'm true
And give me the chance to prove that I'm right
And give me the chance to lighten this night
Never fear the dark, never fear the light
Never be the one to fear what you know's right
Never lose your path, never lose your way
I can't leave the earth until you're okay
Never know true fear, never know true loss
You don't need a church, you don't need a cross
It is you that I would go and die to defend
It is you that I would always need to depend
Just when you think it can't get much worse
Just when you think you should ride in a hearse
Know that I'm just a phone call away
And there's never a price that you have to pay
All alone, by yourself, with no one around
You won't be alone when you're burried in the ground
In spirit and flesh I will be at your side
I want to let it out, I have nothing to hide
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Ash (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, June 3 2004, 12:49 pm|
yeah seizure is back on here and i love this poem. glad to see you posting again josh!
|Seizure (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, June 3 2004, 03:29 pm|
Yeah, I had meant to tell you in an email that I was posting the occassional poem here again... I think I started back two months ago... and in that time I only submitted 4 other poems (3 in April and 1 in May). Shouldn't be hard to catch back up and check out the latest if you still wanted.
I would have told you, but it really just slipped my mind with everything that's been going on. No one reads my work anymore anyway :). Still just writing for me, so I don't care.
I'll say in the time I've been gone, some really talented people have come though, so the site overall is vastly improving with more talent and little features (such as the ability to store a cookie with your name for comment blocks). Dreamer and Vampi are always working I suppose.
Wow, I went on a tangent... thanks for the comment. It was appreciated.
|Terrie* (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 12:05 am|
your work is very unique i enjoyed this as well...they are all very movin'..keep up the great work sweetie..i love your work...keep givin' me somethin' to read...
|barb (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 05:11 am|
I loved this seizure it's so emotional and loving, to me anyway.I'll take it that way, you probably meant something else.Keep writing seizure.
|Seizure (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 05:51 am|
That's what it was intended to be Barb... can't think of any other way I could have intended it... glad I shocked you, ha.
Terrie, right now, I seem to be on an average of 1 a month or so... We'll see if I can get you more to read soon.
|barb (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 04:01 pm|
I shocked you with my poem request and you shocked me with this loving caring poem. very good seizure keep it up.
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, June 5 2004, 01:24 pm|
Wow-- this is wonderful, so full of emotion and caring. I'd love to see more like this.
|Rubydragon (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 03:43 pm|
Hey Seizure, I always read your work, you are one of very few people whose writing seems to inspire me, I think I would be a bit lost without your work to read, it gives hope knowing I am not alone in this blood soaked existence, Keep inspiring me.
|LinzAy (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 05:53 am|
I'm so lucky to know someone with such great talent....we all are, for we get to be inspired and everything by pieces of art like this. I must say that this is one of my favorites....though I believe that's what most, if not all, of your work is. Love it Seiz.
|Seizure (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, August 16 2004, 09:47 pm|
Wow, all of these comments in June and I hadn't seen any of them until now. I had no idea I still inspired anyone. Sorry everyone... I'll post some more soon. Sorry for the delay.
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