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Together We'll Be One
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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With a deep breath I spoke all four words,
With silence time stood still,
An eternity seem to pass for me until you replied,
Wrote you a poem and gave it with love then I asked the question,
As you read my words I saw tears start to flow,
Thought Iíd blown it what did I do?
You looked back into my eyes,
I did not mean to make you cry,
Again I asked will you marry me.
Youíre reply came and I replied pardon,
Yes Iíll marry you Clive,
My heart jumped way out of place,
My pulse raced as I caught my breath,
On my knees I went to give you the ring,
Held you tight as my tears stained your blouse,

An engaged couple we became,
Donít you two belong others would say,

Then out of the blue on a Saturday passed,
I went even further as I asked the next step,
August the 14th do you have anything planed?
Not at this moment why?
Letís get married on this day,
So in two months we marry in love,
Within two months weíll buy a home,
Invites to send; lists to make,
Weíll make the plans for this our date,
Family will gather, Iíll have friends dear,
My family in England is to afar,
However the day will be special in everyway true,
Just because it will mean that Iím with you.

------- Author's Notes -------

Yes you all, I am getting married on 8-14-04
we are yes very busy looking to buy a home before the day,
I am in summer school 1 & 2,
Come the day is a day I look forward to

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.212.213) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 08:52 pm

Clive,

congratulations love, your lil' lady is indeed a very lucky soul..she has in her possesion one true loving man..wish you both many years of happiness..ohh..and your poetry is to fall in love for...keep them comin' strong..Hugs w/love...sooo happy for you...(SMACK) :) one final kiss...
Clive (63.184.0.34) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 09:19 pm

love always

There always be poems coming as for kisses/hugs and love you will always have them in plenty, so until our next warmth love hugs to ya
Barb (66.46.230.195) -- Friday, June 4 2004, 11:07 pm

congratulations

to find that special someone to share your life with is a lucky thing to find. be her best friend let her know she can tell you anything and you'll understand and not judge her. you'll be very happy together if you can tell each other things.
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Saturday, June 5 2004, 02:28 am

HAPPY MARRIAGE CLIVE!

I would like to start off by saying, what a super victorious poem you've submitted about getting married in August... I wish you the best in success and have a happy marriage, with a happy ending! I'm glad to hear such fabulous news! Make merry! Joyful poem!

Smiles,
Meridian
Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 01:44 am

More of a story than a poem

This is a really good story of a promising moment in your life.. congratulations and wonderful tribute to that moment..
 
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