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I Will
5 June, 2004
Author: Tammy

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If tomorrow starts without me,
and your feeling all alone.
Just know that I am right above you
"The Good Lord Called Me Home"

I will come to see you,
but only in your dreams.
I will gently kiss your tears,
and take away the pain.

I will softly whisper (I love you)
as I hold you close to me.
Then I will fly back up to heaven,
and watch you while you sleep.

------- Author's Notes -------

Sometimes we say things we don't mean, or don't
know how bad words hurt, Someone I love very much
said some words that truely broke my heart into.
These words (I hope you die) crushed my soul,
as tears poured from my eyes. I thought if something
happened to me, and I did die what would I want to
say to them after I was know longer here...Well this
poem was what I had to say.

(I wrote this poem last year)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, June 5 2004, 08:59 pm

I hope it's not too soon though.....

Very spiritual Tammy! I hope you live another 100 years, hahhaha... Nice words, nice flow, pretty Tammy, just pretty!!

Smiles,
Meridian
Tammy (66.38.6.76) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 04:15 am

Meridian

Thanx for the comments, and i'm looking forward to another 100 yrs!!! I didn't really know where this poem fit in, but it came to me, and I just had to write it.
brenda gisell garza (4.227.38.159) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 04:44 am

wow!

great poem it was really touching and hopefully your around for many years to come. Thanks for reading my poems stay in tune for my next one I won't stay far.
Great poem
Tammy (66.38.5.15) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 03:43 am

Thanks Brenda G.

Thank you so much for your comments......I am truely enjoying your work too!!!!!
Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 02:40 am

great things

Great things surprisingly come of the bad. This poem was astounding in light of cruel words of another.. Shows a great inner personal strength.. good work..
Tammy (66.38.4.64) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 08:36 am

Tarna

Thanks for your comments on my poem, your words mean alot!!!
 
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