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Robin
Author: Ben Franklin

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Somtimes i think that
my loved ones who have died,
are now those beautiful things
that fly high in the
sky.

I swear i saw a robin cry,
but you had the feeling that it was tears of
joy.

The robin came back same time,
same place,
id feed it everytime,

then when there was nothing left
he would just sit there and stare at me for about ten minutes,

it was a very soothing feeling looking into his eyes,
on this day it spoke,

it said 'everything is going to be alright'

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.6.76) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 03:23 am

Hushy

A robin as an angel never thought about that, but the next time I see one I think I will talk to one of those little Angels....This is a really good poem!!!!!!
Meridian (64.12.116.207) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 08:16 pm

You do it!!!!

I'm glad to see that you've posted the Robin poem! Like Tammy stated, it is very angelic about the robin, and how it changes your perspective....
Meridian (64.12.116.207) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 08:21 pm

by the way..

Hello again Hushy! I meant to say, you did it!!! Also, I agree that some insects, and animals, are angels.... While you look into their eyes, it's almost like commuting with each other.....
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 07:24 pm

Tammy-Meridian

thank you both so much
Tarna (4.227.41.117) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 01:26 am

kewl poem

I like the story of this one
Terrie* (65.148.206.213) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 09:06 pm

Ben , i just had to go back and read...

so glad i did..don't know how i missed..love it....our feathered friends take us closer in flight towards Gods world of rainbows..your words are always like that of an angels wing...they are all gentle and share the tender side of your trusting heart...love this read...i keep my bird feeder(s) full, they are so awesome to watch...my favorite is the humming bird...looks so fragile but he has wings of a mighty warrior...
thank you Luv..for such an excellent read...HUGS/LOVE ,happy 2005......
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 09:40 pm

My friend....

thank you for your kind words,they lift me higher then birds can fly. thank you once again.
 
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