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Peoples Actions
Author: Brenda Gisell Garza

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Tears falling
and people dying
all because of this horrible world
were peoples actions are the cause of each other's deaths.
Poor souls
who die without a cause
end up suffering
before it's their time.
Their souls just wondering around
until someone unfolds
their mystery to their deaths.
Having at times to wait
an eternity.
Without ever resting
watching peoples actions,
people dying
and tears falling.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.4.228) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 05:35 am

WOW

How true your words are in this poem......this is truely touching!!!!
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 03:41 pm

True Brenda

People's actions do have an effect... Whether good, or bad... I'm sorry about your loss..... Meaningful tribute Brenda! Keep up the astounding work!!!

Smiles,
Meridian
Brenda (4.226.195.157) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 03:08 am

Meridian/tammy

Thank you both I am truley grateful that you both have enjoyed my work thank you so much.
Griselda (4.226.243.70) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 05:21 am

wow

I really love your poems keep on writing.
Great poem
Omar (4.226.243.70) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 05:22 am

again wow

I want to know how do you do it.
victor (4.226.243.70) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 05:24 am

dam

GURL YOU GOT talent
Amber (24.0.72.130) -- Saturday, September 18 2004, 04:13 am

hey girl...love it!!!

I love all your poems girl!!! see you at school monday!!!
 
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