Author: Brenda Gisell Garza
As you came closer I started to shake
but not with fear
but of the cold.
You lay me down on the bed gently.
You tell how you love me.
You put red roses on my body,
and on the bed.
As soon as you kiss me
all the candles light themselves.
It seems as if all time has stoped for you and me.
When we were threw
you held me in your arms
and started to whisper in my ear "te amo"
and then i open my eyes
and your face slowly begins to drift away.
Then at that one moment i know
that one more night with my
dream boy has sadly
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 01:14 am|
i just got thru reading your other poems and they are like this one "extrordinary", i always enjoy a good read and yours are out of this world they are up there, this one took me somewhat back in time w/my navy guy(husband)as i think of all our passionate moments we shared i haven't meet anyone that comes close to making me feel like he has...still think of him only all is very cloudy...but,first loves always leave a deep impression..i look forward to more beauties like you have written..
|brenda (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 03:06 am|
Thank you for reading my poems it really means alot that you have enjoyed them I won't leave you disappointed I will many poem out so stay tuned
|Tarna (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, June 10 2004, 01:10 am|
You are a very gifted writer. Not only for your age but natural ability.. I liked this one I could almost see the disapating spector of your "Dream Boy" .. Great read Brenda.. keep up the good work... And I will keep reading :)
|brenda (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, October 8 2004, 12:08 am|
sorry that it took me so long to write you and to thank you for very kind words. once again thank you!
|omar (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, September 10 2005, 04:57 am|
I love it
|samantha (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, April 12 2006, 11:23 pm|
this really explains me and the person i am talking to a great poem i think
|jasmine (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, May 19 2008, 12:33 am|
i wanted to know if i could use this poem for my boyfriend it is so perfect!!!
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