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The Silence
7 June, 2004
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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In the silence
the thoughts are not mine
The Darkness and the Light
fight to speak to me
Between the laughter and the tears
I tread softly listening
I hear their stories
I feel their pains

I open my eyes to shake them away
Yet they return again,
with so much to say
In the commotion of the quiet
I sit..
Trying to comprehend
the silence

------- Author's Notes -------

all is not quiet in the aloneness of silence

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.54.205) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 09:33 am

Dreamer

This poem is truely amazing.......all your beautiful work is!!!!!
Martin V (4.244.87.247) -- Monday, June 7 2004, 09:36 pm

I See & Hear, As You Do...,

Dreamer,

You hear the slence, shouting in your dreams, searching for, reality. I hear the same words to, sometimes, there are pictures, dizzy gray, from the clouds and the moon, sometimes when,I think, I am a wake, I hear and see, the same as you. Your heart is crying out, your soul is speaking out, I hear and see, the same as you do, but, without a sound.

More Than A poem,

MartinV
Sweet Sara (216.39.188.228) -- Friday, June 11 2004, 06:19 pm

not all is what it seems.

this poems says so much! it might be so silent that its not realy silent. not all is as we see it and theres many things out there talking to us and showing us tryin to make us understand them. great one dreamer!
xx (172.132.79.130) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 02:39 am

true true

the silence of one person is the noise of ones mind turning and thinking some times silence says more then a scream
 
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