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Dear Diary
Author: Shorty

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Dear Diary,
one day i had a crush,
one day he said he liked me too.
one day i was with him,
one day he said he had fun too.
one day i got my first kiss,
one day it was his too.
one day we had gone too far,
one day we got drunk too.
one day i was expecting,
one day he was scared too.
one day he blamed me,
one day i blamed him too.
one day can change everything,
one day could be today for you.
someday he'll say he loves me,
someday we'll get married too.
someday we'll be happy,
some day our daughter will be too.

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Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 05:22 pm

WOW Shorty!

The rhyme scheme was off the hook! One day...
I love the repetetive verse! There's so much uniqueness in your poem! I love "Dear Diary!"

Smiles,
Meridian
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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