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It Can't Be True
Author: KitKatrina

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The words so softly,
They came right out,
Having no clue,
What sheís talking about,
I wasnít prepared,
Please take it back,
I donít want to hear,
About another heart attack,
Dad is still with us,
Everything you say is a lie,
I know that heís here,
Our dad is still alive,
Why are crying,
With that tone in your voice,
Whatís going on?
ďTrina it wasnít my choice,Ē
But he had to be here,
Heís too young to die,
Please just tell me,
Is what youíre saying a lie?
Oh dear God!
Just give him back to me,
I donít want my dad,
To have to rest in peace,
He needs to see me grow,
It canít be true,
Oh dad Iím sorry,
Iím really going to miss youÖ

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Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 05:28 pm

Heart goes out....

Hey Trina... My heart goes out to you and your family for the loss of your father... I'm sorry about what happened... Bittersweet poem... Very sweet words, even though the pain within is bitter....
I send you my deepest condolences...

Smiles,
Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.230.37) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 04:35 pm

Kit,

welcome back, 'aye you know me and how i feel 'bout heart attacks..sad way to lose a loved one at a very young age..wish my love was still present today as you wish your dad to be..but..our love never dies memories may be destroyed but not what is engraved in our hearts..this was sad, i felt it's every word, hugs my friend.
 
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