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Emotions Day By Day
Author: Britney

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sitting and watching as time goes
wanting and waiting as i grow
hate and despair after all i give
depression and sadness
make's me want 2 go.

Even no these words may seem
bad there true.But i won't leave
this world because it will hurt u!
I love u i do it's just the feeling's
a teenager will go thru!

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Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 05:32 pm

Been there a lot

I've been through a roller coaster of emotions.... I know what you're talking about.... I am a teen, and I've gone through similar situations and hardships.... I'm glad you decided not to take your life! What a relief! Very descriptive poem! I enjoyed both stanzas!

Smiles,
Meridian
Britney (67.136.110.55) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 08:31 pm

thank you

I'm glad u like it yes all teenagers will like go thru these emotion's so i decided 2 write a poem bout it thank you alot.Britney
 
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