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Mary Shines
18 June, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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I met up with Mother Mary
Down at the Rainbow's End
It's amazing how quickly
We became fast friends
Mary talks my hat off
And I break into a smile
Something that girl's got
Makes life seem more worthwhile

Mary rolled out here from Cleveland
Along with Grant, her old man
With their cats and their posessions
Packed in a Volkswagen van
Mary brought some laughter
To this little mountain town
I sure am gonna miss her
When she's no longer around

Mary shines, Mary shines
It's so sweet of her
Sweet of her to be so kind
Mary shines, Mary shines

Her parents named her
Named her Mary Lou
On the day she was born
I'm sure Mother Mary's
Mother and Daddy knew
Mary Shines, Mary shines

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Brenda Michelle (64.12.96.46) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:00 pm

WOW

once again Ben you have proven your self to be a great poet! i wish i knew Mary Lou! i love reading your poetry, it makes me smile =o)
cathy perry (67.202.13.243) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:17 pm

:)

this made me stop, think, and smile.
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Sunday, June 29 2003, 01:01 pm

Good One

Lol, I'm looking through all your poems, and reading each one, jus' to sit back every time, amazed, as if it as the first time, I've ever seen such good writing. You have much talent, and I envy that. Please, keep on writing!!
Ben (67.122.250.114) -- Thursday, December 4 2003, 01:39 am

Thanks Brenda Michelle, Cathy and Crimson Angel for...

Thank you Brenda Michelle, Cathy and Crimson Angel for your encouraging words on Mary Shines! Please forgive me fo taking so long, I do try to keep up, but I missed these somehow. Anyway, I want you to know I appreciate each and every one of your comments. Thanks again for letting me know you liked this! ***Ben
 
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