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My New Friend
10 June, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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Deep conversations
Far into the night
Talking about creation
Darkness and light
Wtith you
My New Friend

We are only human
Turning in this tide
With so much in common
And I will not hide
From you
My new friend

My innermost thoughts
I'm sharing with you
And I see all you've got
You are sharing too
Yes you
My new friend

The power of your presence
Brings light to my day
Something in your essence
Blows me away
It's true
My new friend

Our hearts are touching
Yes that scares me some
But there is a reason
My feet won't run
From you
My new friend

Where is all this leading
Now that's hard to say
I only know I'm happy
You came this way
Oh you
My new friend
Yahoo
My new friend

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Brenda Michelle (64.12.96.136) -- Tuesday, June 17 2003, 01:09 am

Another Great Poem

you also did a wonderful job in discription. your poetry makes it seem like it is real! i want a friend like that! well, once again GREAT JOB! here is a rose to congrat you on your great work of art!
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cathy perry (67.202.13.243) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:20 pm

great job

you put words to how so many people feel when they are getting to know someone new.
Ben (64.175.70.105) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 07:39 am

Brenda Michelle and Cathy Perry thank you for....

Brenda Michelle and Cathy Perry, thank you so much for your encouraging words! I appreciate them very much and I'm happy that you can relate to it! And thanks for the cyber-rose, too! Best Regards, Ben
 
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