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I Can't
11 June, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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Am I too blame for all of this
For all of the pain
All of the insanity
The sudden downpour of rain

Blame me, hate me
But I'll stand here waiting for you to comeback to me
Rain and all
I can't let this be the end, I can't let this be

I am to blame for all of this
All of your tears come true
All of your heartache
All of your fears come true

Blame me, hate me
I'll stand firmly on this ground waiting with an apology
Rain and all
I can't give up on you and I, I can't let this be

I blame myself painfully
Whisper an apology with tears
You'll hear it if you want it
Oh, how I pray you hear

Forgive me, again love me
I'll stand here waiting forever for you to
Rain and all
I know I've made a horrible mistake, But I can't let go of you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 05:48 am

full of emotion

Hey linz,
This was such an emotionally charged poem, i can tell. i loved it, great poem
LinzAy (172.201.194.101) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 06:48 am

EV!!

Hey there boy!! I saw all my recent poems commented on and i was like....EEEEVVVV!!!! lol......yes, i think i roleplayed in this one though, pur myself in someone elses shoes.....yes, purred myself....lol...i meant put ;)
 
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