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Can't Tell
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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We can tell when someone is glad.
We can tell when someone is mad.
We can tell when someone is a slob.
We can tell when someone sobs.
Someone's thoughts if morbid, mean or kind,
WE CAN'T TELL

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hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 09:44 pm

hi

ello barb,please dont think im rude but could you explain the reason you think this?
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barb (66.46.230.243) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 01:26 am

ok

without going into detail years ago I met someone that I liked but his thoughts I didn't like. I was in to deep before I found out, he kept them hidden very well, do you understand now. hope I explained it ok.
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 12:48 pm

Yes

I understand Barb. Some people keep their true self well hidden until you get to know them well. People who are more open are easier to trust.
barb (66.46.230.254) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 01:13 pm

yep

you got that right cap . Tthat's why I like people that express themselves and keep no secrets. But that does take a while to find out.nobody can keep up a pretense for ever eventually they show what they are really like.
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 02:35 pm

Very good!

Applause time..... Clap, clap! Very good Barb! It's good to see someone's emotions, rather than putting a shield or a mask behind their true self, so we'll never see the real person.....
Nicely written again Barb! I never tire of your work!
Smiles,
Meridian
barb (66.46.230.81) -- Monday, June 14 2004, 09:20 pm

thanks for reading

Ii have alot to say Hhaa don't I Meridan
 
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