Watercolours
9 June, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
I'm shutting out the world
Outside my door
I got nothin' to say
To anyone
I'm forgettin' that girl
And that's for sure
In time the days will fade
The memory of
Watercolours
Watercolours
watercolours in the rain
I'm not taking any calls
Don't try my line
I'm gonna be alright
Without talkin'
I just want to see the walls
Quiet my mind
And sit right here tonight
Just watchin'
Watercolours
Watercolours
Watercolours in the rain
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| bench (192.168.0.36) -- Friday, June 13 2003, 07:45 am I like how this poem feels in my mouth when I read it aloud! Nice man! |
| Ben (67.124.44.87) -- Friday, June 13 2003, 09:57 pm Thank you, Bench!! I' m glad you like this one. |
| Brenda Michelle (64.12.96.136) -- Tuesday, June 17 2003, 01:18 am you have proven your self again. if this is true i hope everything has gotten better. and what a coincedence, it is raining right now were i live. when i stand out side i feel your pain coming down! great job! |
| cathy perry (67.202.13.243) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:46 pm once again you captured a life experience many of us lived through once or twice... |
| terrie (65.148.210.169) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 02:05 am Ben, WOW!! you are a fascinating person, your poems are just as unique as you are i read them all!! felt,Loved and enjoyed them . |
| Ben Laney (65.148.212.62) -- Saturday, July 31 2004, 08:07 am Brenda Michelle, rain has been known to make watercolours run like rain down a window pane. Thank you very much for your comment on this writing, I really do appreciate it, and ask your forgiveness in taling so long. I am pleased to know that you got a feeling from reading it while the rain was falling in New Mexico. All the best to you, Ben |
| Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 12:06 am terrie, thank you for your positive feedback, I really appreciate it very much. I am amazed that you've read all my writings and glad to know you found them to be unique, and that you enjoyed them as well! Best Regards, Ben |
| Ben Laney (63.194.136.161) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 12:18 am Thank you, cathy perry, for your kind words on Watercolours, I do appreciate your taking the time to send a few words all the way from New Mexico, girl! So, you've known that "dripping sensation", too, I guess. Haa! Haaaa! Best Regards, Ben |
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