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My Angel
15 June, 2004
Author: Britney

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Your like the sand in my hands closing my hand and hoping it don't
don't slip out because it reminds me of you because if it
slip's out it's like im gonna lose you a good friend that is
true so I hold on tight so I don't loose your grip.
You pull me out of bad time's like I was stuck in a whirlpool
and you pulled me out.You make light as if the thunderstorm
was never there.You make laughter when i'm depressed
as i'm like in a maze that I couldn't get threw.Your like
the sun and moon when there was no light you managed
to make the sun come through.Your like A dog on my side
here to comfort me your also like A lake calm and laid back
and there when I need you.Your like A garden of roses
not one alike but beautiful your like the flower's in the garden
no one else like you and i'm glad I met you if I didn't and you
weren't here I have no clue what I would do most of all
your like my angel here watching me above an angel
truley you. I've grown to love trust and care for you and
i'm happy I meet you.So darling angel your my star my
wind my sun my moon my flower and comfort and many
more.I'll love you and forever too and many more as friend though
So my darling angel thank you for being you and being so true
A poem from the heart but so very true I love you friend I really do.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 06:16 pm

A guardian Angel Indeed!

An angel that shines, with a heart so big, there's room enough for the world! From the 1st line of your poem to the last, my eyes weren't satisfied to they read the whole thing! And Britney, words about sand, and a dog, comparing your friend to all these wonderful descriptions is beyond inspirational! No wonder the after taste of my waffle was good, because I read such strong words that stand out, like this friendship dedication you've posted! A bond so strong, it's unbreakable! This was a masterpiece Britney!

Smiles,
Meridian
britney (67.136.110.55) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 09:37 pm

ty i think

ty i think well hope ya injoyed it britney
 
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