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8:16 P.m. Tuesday Night
Author: Jeremy Morzos

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In space between teeth poison wings
Flying downward spiral hollow
Not like this moment a kiss of golden tongues
Climb the walls love spider crawls
Inside the brain lyes reflection
Broken tissues of recognition constantly bugged
Outside The eyes of complexion distant aggravation
Howling at the moon starry skies and tears sold
How can you sell your soul if you just fold?
I'm growing old dying and trying to win your love
I think I like this side of you
In space and the apple of youth smiling and binding
Flash of light coloring a dream world to exist
Luminious I stare up at the skies and watch
As you close your eyes Twist of bone makes a good woman cry
And sunshine comes through the ceiling and laughing
I never want to say goodbye smiling and now that I like you
There's just something about you I'm not quite sure
What it is what could it possibly be?
Truly honesty is the key to the heart and familararity
I'm hungry for a taste of love that rolls off the tongue And downward spiral round and round 'til we also fall down
Love gun come on frozen and want to feel love that is
Passionate and real being together makes a true friend
When one is blue in the face and don't know what to do
Smiling will always be a sign in depiction of thoughts
From my mind is a flame needing to be tame and
At night turn the radio off and sing your own song
I'm alone at this game hoping I can play with somebody else
And for it to still be the same La,La,La boo yah
I think I'm slipping into something a little more
Comfortable or change positions and now that I like you
I want to get to know you better and want to know
What your all about The person you are....
Pause just because I'm speechless tongue tied
Lost in your beauty of summertime always shine
In your eyes I'm still in space but all together in place
Fine light switch click tick tock what time is it?
Poetry in motion flows into the rivers and all the ocean
Such a delight it is to have you....
Change again than back to switch and switch back switch
Poetry in motion yearns burning with emotion timid flame
And fragile smile Whoa- stop rewind play back
And there you have it that's a wrap.

------- Author's Notes -------

I think this poem is very intresting and unique in my many different styles of writing and I feel it's time you people see this that is in me I thank you all for the inspiration you have given me on here and I'd like to say there's
alot of talent out there this is what I leave you with
and all of you have been well I believe are strange people
but all and all I still love you!!!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 05:09 pm

WHOOOOOOOA!

Hey now! Jeremy, that was so good, so unique! To have thoughts like that @ 8:16 p.m. too! Your mind was racing in nature, wasn't it? Someone's beauty so perfect, that it took you to much higher levels, where she made you fly and float in poetry! All sorts of creative words were wrapped around you that night! Very good, very beautiful, very unique Jeremy!

Smiles,
Meridian
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 12:20 pm

???

strange people??whats all that bout mate?and why do you feel we have to see this in you? there is no doubt you are a talented writer,nut theres no need to rub it in. dont think im having a go,but your words seem very pompus.
 
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