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A Good Day
17 June, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Sitting out front with my sunglasses on,
still squinting,
damn that $4.99 man at the flea market!

oh well you live and you learn.

I like to sit here and watch the world go by,
watching the people rush from A-B,
id like to shout out 'hey its sunday have a rest!'
but i dont wanna be a pest.

Majority of the time its noisy,
but when its peacefull it is truly heaven on earth.

The suns out and my Robin has come to have a chat with me again,

why cant everyday be the same?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 05:51 pm

Man!

Ben, the way your mind works is extraordinaire, I love sunglasses too... That's another item, that describes me well.... Your dream, sounded very much like reality, it was so good! So when it's peaceful, it's like heaven eh? I wish I dreamt the same dream!
Well have fun!
Smiles,
Meridian
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 01:14 pm

flea market

hey m,thanks for the comment,the first paragraph is so true, i went on hoilday to orlando in march and went to the flea market and bought two pairs of sunglasses,the first pair actully fell apart whilst on my eyes,in front of everybody,i went bright red!the other pair i mentioned...well they just dont work!damn that man!!
take care
much love
ben
 
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