Author: Barbara Goodhew
Some days we just want to escape.
A place where there are no problems.
A place without worries.
To go some place with no stress,
Wouldn't it be nice, for a while to escape?
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 03:40 pm|
Sometimes, I lock my doors in my room, to think, and just breathe through my nose.... Or sometimes, I find a secure place in my mind, or heart, to escape life's trials.... Very good analogy there Barb! This is another beautifully described poem!
|barb (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 05:50 pm|
My place that I go to is inside myself and my writing helps me escape.I never tried the closet, but good idea.:))
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 10:23 pm|
Mmm... I write poems to escape too, though I don't get so much time these days.
I'd like to find a place that's peaceful with no phones ringing to disturb your thoughts... know what I mean?
|barb (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 02:05 am|
my thoughts are like a good dream. I hate loosing it, by a loud disturbance.Hha
|Clive (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 03:28 pm|
To find that secret place, I think I'd stay if just for a while,
I write in hope that I find this place, but then I'd fill it with the people I'd miss
Thank YOu Barb for seeing these words and sharing
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 06:12 pm|
If you find this place let me know ok Hha Ha. thanks for the the comment.
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