Cascading Sweat
Author: Mental


I want to feel your breath
on my tongue
i want to feel my
emotions rise rung by rung
i want to touch your curves
cascading with sweat
i want to feel your words coming from your eyes
that ill never forget.
touch the core
to inside
blossom forever
fantasies can never hide.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann ( -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 07:15 pm

Thanks, passion is still alive, C it in her eyes!


This is such a private poem, I, like you, have seen her eyes, and when she cried, and threw her arms around me, it wasn't because of pain.

Nice to know, someone sees, love in her eyes, as I do.

Martin V
taboo ( -- Thursday, February 13 2014, 02:19 am

very romantic

so passionate and raw very good
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