You Or My Dream
Author: Abhi


From the Far of the Sky
A face comes in my mind
From the Deep of the ocean
A voice comes in my mind
Is that you or My dilemma
I dont know but it is wonderful
And always Makes me happy

------- Author's Notes -------

Love Never Lost


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 05:17 am

finding out

Wanting to know if it's real or not..... I think that's a beautiful rhetorical question....
Just follow your instincts, Abhi, and it'll reveal the love mystery....
Good Sherlock Holmes poem!
Great writing Abhi
Terrie* ( -- Friday, July 2 2004, 11:36 pm


i can really feel what your puttin' out on have a great way of expressing and to the point..hugs/love beautifully expressed..
Name:                                           Remember Me

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