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If I
25 June, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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if I fall..
will you be there to catch me?
if I was to stumble...
will you still be there to lend me a hand?
if I became hard to reach..
would you extend your hand to pull me through?
if I fell in too deep into the pit of life
would you personally dive in to carry me out?
if I became confused..
would you explain it to me
if things got worse at the end..
would you hold me and guide me through?
if I was to get lost
would you hold my hand and walk with me ?
if my heart seemed empty
would you fill it up with your love?
if at the very end
I was to die
from a broken heart
please take me into your arms and hold me tight?

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Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 07:10 pm

Wonderful

Simply beautiful! *clap, clap*! Hhaahha..... You know, I found myself asking almost the same questions, to a friend.... I wanted to get to know that person better, to see if they would, hold true to their words..... Very good questions Terrie*! I hope you find an answer soon.....

Smiles,
Meridian
Clive (63.184.1.132) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 08:06 pm

All this and more

As you're friend at the top of the list,
I'd do all this for you and so much more,
Be happy always smile,
love 'n' Hugs
Terrie* (65.148.215.235) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 08:58 pm

Meri,

Thank you poetry Goddess....looks like i don't need to look any further our friend Clive has come to my rescue..now how lucky can a girl get, plus he's willin' to do much more..thats my friend.....smiling for ya..
Terrie* (65.148.215.235) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 09:00 pm

Clive my loving friend

i believe you would no doubt 'bout it..now for sure i know i'm safe, and in your arms at that..your definently not moving a notch down my list, smilin' just for you hugs/love
 
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