Author: Brenda Gisell Garza
I look out the window
and see the rain .
The rain reminds me
of my unknown tears.
Tears that are never seen
cause I hide them well.
I fool everyone
and sometimes even myself
yet i feel as if I am
lying to everyone.
I act as if nothings wrong
but I know deep down inside that
i can't hide the way I feel
------- Author's Notes -------
This is a poem of how I feel everyday that I can not see myself moving on.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Omar (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 03:46 am|
wow out of this world!(=*-)
|Meridian (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 04:37 pm|
Good comparison about the weather and how you feel about a certain person.... This is very touching....
Great writing Brenda!
|brenda garza (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 03:08 am|
thank you for your kind words!
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