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Him
Author: Brenda Gisell Garza

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I look out the window
and see the rain .
The rain reminds me
of my unknown tears.
Tears that are never seen
cause I hide them well.
I fool everyone
and sometimes even myself
yet i feel as if I am
lying to everyone.
I act as if nothings wrong
but I know deep down inside that
i can't hide the way I feel
about HIM.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is a poem of how I feel everyday that I can not see myself moving on.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Omar (4.227.35.144) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 03:46 am

Wow

wow out of this world!(=*-)
Meridian (205.188.113.138) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 04:37 pm

the weather

Good comparison about the weather and how you feel about a certain person.... This is very touching....

Great writing Brenda!
Smiles,
Meridian
brenda garza (4.226.246.35) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 03:08 am

thank you Meridian

thank you for your kind words!
 
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