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Me, I'm Just Like You
Author: Ben Franklin

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Me,
I'm just like you
I get mad when I cant find my left shoe,

Me,
I'm just like you
I get mad when I've run out of toilet paper
and I've just had a poo

Me,
Im just like you
I get mad when I'm in the supermarket and I'm at the back
of the queue

Me,
I'm just like you
I get mad when my younger brother scratches my only album by the 'Who'

Me,
I'm just like you
I get mad when I'm stuck In traffic and I cant get through

Me,
I'm just like you

Are'nt I?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.87.233) -- Saturday, June 26 2004, 10:49 pm

Ben,

this is too good..i really enjoyed it you have a unique type of talent, i'm hooked on your words...cool job..also made me smile..
Ben (4.182.132.249) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 12:32 am

Thanks, Terrie* for the credit for Hushy's......

Thank you, Terrie*, for giving me credit for writing this poem by Hushy....that is soooo sweet of you!! Haaaa! Haaaaaa! Now as for you, Hushy.... I really appreciate the humour in this one. It took me all the way back to my days in day care! Thanks for the laugh!!

Best Regards,
Ben
Terrie* (65.148.230.167) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 01:08 am

Ben (Hushy) & Ben Laney

oh! oh! 2 Bens on site...and both write incredible..and reel me in with their poetic lines..hugs to ya both
Ben Laney (4.182.132.147) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 01:53 am

Sorry, Hushy, I got mixed up a little...

Sorry, Hushy, I got mixed up a little bit. This poem is humorous, but it doesn't quite take me back as far as day care. My mistake, I do enjoy the humor in this, though!
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Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 08:45 pm

Ben number21..............

Hi terrie*! Thank you for being ''hooked'' on my words,i love all your poems!thanks again
ben number 21
Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 08:48 pm

Ben-ja-min laney...

hey Ben how you doing?gald it make you think of ''day care''!?!?
ive also read most of your work and you are very talanted.
thanks again
Ben number 21
Terrie* (65.135.87.104) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 08:34 pm

Ben may i reply?

your both awesome writers...HUGS/LOVE
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