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Together We Stay
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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My thoughts are overwhelmed with you,
Each time I turn I see you in my eye,
I hear a voice and could swear it is you,
A love that past so long ago we moved along,
Time has past the both of us by,
Still each day you walk across my heart,
Where you once before left footprints to stay,
To feel you I could always do,
Happy or sad I knew what to say,
You in return would look into my soul and just know,
Together we worked too well to be,
Parted as we did way back then,
Our souls stayed locked together for all time that followed,
You can run and try to hide,
For the bond we two have together was just meant to be,
You and I will always be apart of us

------- Author's Notes -------

Never to leave my thoughts,

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.7.93) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 07:40 pm

Clive,

to feel you there
to know you care
to cross your path
i feel the love you hath
very enjoyable my friend hugs/love
barb (209.112.22.153) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 10:53 pm

setting me straight

Your writing is so beautiful and Terries comments arespecial too. I was just wondering is it each other you've found?
Clive (63.184.97.29) -- Sunday, June 27 2004, 11:10 pm

Thank you terrie and Barb

umm No Barb Terrie like yourself is a special friend,
Terrie* (65.136.7.194) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 12:28 am

Clive, do you mind?

do you mind me commentin' to Barbs comment?

Barb, wow i am so flattered of such a thought.. geez what can i say i often get lost in the thoughts of a great poet and Clive is one of many exquisite poets on this site. whose poem i find elictrifies me..sometimes i comment w/a poem..do you not do the same when you can grasp at their thoughts ..but then,i'm a more forward touchy feely person in love w/love.. i leave w/smiles cause you flattered me Barb thank you...haha sorry Clive..hope your bride understands :)
barb (209.112.22.153) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 02:50 am

oops sorry

Since my brain tumor Tterrie I take things the wrong way. I'm glad Ii flattered you though and Clive I'm sorry Ii misunderstood.
Terrie* (65.148.201.115) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 03:19 am

Clive, please if i may?

Barb, no harm done..'honest innocent mistake..i make them all the time..were you playing matchmaker? ??? if you are ...find me a match... haha !!in the mean time..
let's you and i enjoy Clives heartfelt poetry to fall in love for.....
hugs/love
paige from some where in alabama (24.143.7.218) -- Friday, February 27 2009, 05:51 pm

I live for poetry like this

this is the best poem i have read in forever it is like you read your soul right out on paper plese write more i am a 14 year old in love with seventeen year old and we need a poem he is like my prince charming and i his princess thanks
 
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