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Sunnier Days -
Author: Demon_99

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Moments of happiness, life begins
A trinket of peace, life lessons
Angelic presence, love blooms
Joyous occasion, new life
Time flows, aging settles
What was young, now is old
The two souls part, to meet again
Were they walk, hand in hand
Life goes on, for those whom remain
Threw the years, life endures
Hope stays for those, thinking of sunnier days

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Wednesday, June 30 2004, 05:25 pm

yes it does!!

Demon_99, you're on a roll! So much truth and realism your poem holds! I like the way you wrote the poems, with the comas, and whatnot..... So wonderful eh? Nice way of explaining! D_99!

Smiles,
Meridian
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 12:17 am

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nice poem D :)
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 12:48 am

Thanks

Thanks for the comments, and ya i over do the punctuation at times, 2 english classes a day for 4 years forces it lol.
 
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