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Essence -
1 July, 2004
Author: Demon_99

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Time goes forward, ending for none.
Questions unanswered, pondering, concern.
Fleeting moments of peace in chaos surpreme.
The essence of life, divine, free.

------- Author's Notes -------

Short and Sweet :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 07:13 am

Martins KISS

Heh, Martin had left a comment on one of my poems about the basics of KISS...do some research to find out what that is...oooor i suppose ya could just ask us..lol. I think my favorite line is the first "time goes forward, ending for none" Nice writing:)
barb (66.46.230.253) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 06:39 pm

I heard what KISS STANDS FOR

lInzay I've had that on my poems it a joke it stands for KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID.hHAAA
barb (66.46.230.253) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 06:40 pm

I heard what KISS STANDS FOR

lInzay I've had that on my poems it a joke it stands for KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID.hHAAA OH YEA DEMON NICE WRITING.
LinzAy (205.188.116.130) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 06:08 am

no title

Well, I believe Martin told me that it meant Keep It Short and Simple.......yessum.
Meridian (149.174.164.71) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 06:54 am

truth

Time is of the essence, and so is life; as you've beautifully explained in this "short and simple" piece of literature.... Very good analogy! It's very truth.... Life does go on, and time, flies...

Take care poetry braniac! lol!
Great work, Demon_99, Great work!
Smiles,
Meridian
 
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