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All Things Fragile Aside
Author: Demon_99

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I hate feeling this way, life turns inside out
Irratating, self control has lost its grip
Hate dwells deep within an uncontrolable mind
Cold emotions slipping into darkness
I think its time to bleed the world dry
Crumble the basis of all i hold dear
Constant disbelief in myself
Never ending pain

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 06:14 am

......

Frustration is what I feel reading this....good poem boi :)
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Tuesday, July 6 2004, 04:46 pm

super wow

Aggrivated, irritated, frustrated, and vexed... Very, very descriptive! This poem is like show and tell... It shows and tells your emotions, through writing.... I feel your pain Demon_99!

Smiles,
Meridian
 
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