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Whatever
Author: Scorpio

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I took my chance
I was loving you
Boy don't you realize
What I went through

I loved you from the start
I gave you my heart
Whatever

If it don't mean anything to you
Why do I try?
If there's no point to this
I'm asking why
Am I standing here
Looking like a fool
Waiting on something
That'll never come through

So this is it
No more to go to
All so pointless
We lived a lie I thought was true

I can't believe you did this
After all that bliss
Whatever

If it don't mean anything to you
Why do I try?
If there's no point to this
I'm asking why
Am I standing here
Looking like a fool
Waiting on something
That'll never come through

I tried so hard
I gave you my heart
And after all this
You leave

If it don't mean anything to you
Why do I try?
If there's no point to this
I'm asking why
Am I standing here
Looking like a fool
Waiting on something
That'll never come through

------- Author's Notes -------

This is my second song, I'm trying to get the melody down to a decent beat. To be quite honest, I was listening to the song Whatever by En Vogue at the time and so this is where I got the idea. So credit to that. Heheh. Anyway, I could use some feedback on it a bit, since it's my second song and I know there could be a few mistakes. And by the way, the last verse between the two choruses doesn't rhyme and I have that for a special reason. So.. Yeah. =/

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (149.174.164.71) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 06:11 am

Lady Scorpio

Good morning Scorpio! Love lost or love ending eh? Hahha.... If you keep this up, you'll be on the billboard charts.. lol! In all seriousness, very good writing as always! You never cease to write good poetry...

P.S. And to tell you the truth, I thought you were my age; a graduate....lol! You are so intelligent when putting things into words.... Cheers and claps for you! Again, outstanding job Scorpio!

Smiles,
Meridian
Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 11:05 am

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Heheh, the story of the song is to pretty much explain how she is going to move on and her way of showing it is through "Whatever"

Well, I'm hoping to make it big some day! :) So far, as far as I'm going, I've been modeling for a friend who is doing art of me for companies and whatnot and these song writings will -hopefully- become recorded! So I'm hoping all goes well! And I always try to improve on my poems. :)

You really thought I was your age? Wow, that's a big compliment for me! I try so hard to improve myself because I see people my age who are really *blink* stupid.. And it's sad. So I try to persue a good example of myself and whatnot. ^^ Thank you so much!

Smiles In Return,
Scorpio
 
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