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Revolution
Author: Scorpio

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Turn the music up high
Bring the lights down low
Girls get your man
And shake to the flow

Listen to the revolution
The exposure of today
Turn up the volume
And dance the night away

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
We're shaking our hips to the beat
And our movements in sexy stance

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
Make way for the sisters today
We got tomorrow's first glance

Take a look into the future
Tell us what you can see
It's the daughters of revolution
Rocking the new world's alley

Listen to the revolution
The exposure of today
Turn up the volume
And dance the night away

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
We're shaking our hips to the beat
And our movements in sexy stance

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
Make way for the sisters today
We got tomorrow's first glance

Raise the roof to the music
Bring down the house tonight
Raise the roof to the music
We're bringing the revolution's light

Listen to the revolution
Can you pick up the beat
Listen to the revolution
Can you move your feet

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
We're shaking our hips to the beat
And our movements in sexy stance

We're the daughters of revolution
Turn up the volume -- Dance
Make way for the sisters today
We got tomorrow's first glance

------- Author's Notes -------

Another song I just wrote. This one, if having music, would be a fast dance one with a beat and stuff. Anyway, it's the only song I have written that I have the melody down for. Anyway, my best friend/sister is writing songs too and she's going to try and record her songs and mine on a CD or something and if so the label will be called Sisters of Revolution. So this song was made particularly for that. Can I get some feedback? :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 06:12 pm

the sound of the drums

Whoa Scorpio! You've got talent! And it's good to know that you and your sibling are working on a joint CD....Combining your skills! I say, Go for it! I truly enjoyed this poem/song.... Your message to the world is: Listen to the REVOLUTION! You're off the hook! Keep on working at it, and soon you'll be famous!

W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L Scorpio!
Have fun!
Smiles,
Meridian
Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Friday, July 2 2004, 06:33 pm

Heehee!

Thank you! I put a lot of thuoght into what I write and honestly, I need something with a beat; something that screams out to the public, "STOP LIVING IN THE PAST! LOOK TO THE FUTURE! THE REVOLUTION!" Heeheeh, her and I are hoping for a lot out of it and I can't wait to see it. :D Thank you so much, your compliments give me so much confidence out of my low self esteem!

Thank you again!
Smiles,
Scorpio
Red Sarah (66.125.109.77) -- Tuesday, August 3 2004, 05:03 am

great song!

I really like the beat that your writing makes me feel. And I think the song's message is very powerful, and very important in my opinion - look to the future, embrace the revolution :) You are very talented
Cheers,
Red Sarah
 
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