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Way Back When
5 July, 2004
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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That cold night one September morning,
I remember catching you’re eye as you looked on,
You saw me shivering and cold,
I could see in you’re eye as you asked why?
I offered you a hand with all you’re bags,
In for coffee you offered,
Thank you madam I replied,
Coffee lead to stories that you listened,
Laughter I heard it’s been a while,
Take a shower I’ve some old clothes that just may fit,
Odd jobs I completed to help out,
Stayed that night and more that followed,
Friends we became,
I soon was working and on my feet,
All because of you my friend,
A tray was made with flowers from heaven,
Tea for two with toast,
You see that was now 10 years ago,
Today we’re wed and still friends we are,
But much more than that,
Lover’s every day and night.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.54.98.106) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 12:27 am

Clive,

to all whoms path you cross you become very special deep in ones heart you are a heart so hard to let go of you are so full of life and love
i am very fortunate to have had you cross mine.. your friendship is special...I will NEVER let go of.....hugs/love always...
Brett (205.214.208.136) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 01:26 am

Amazing

Hi Clive, I wanted to say say that I love your writing, especially this poem. It actually paints in a picture in your head of it happening. Excellent poem! :)
Clive (63.184.0.170) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 03:33 am

Thank You

Thank You Terrie I am and always shall be you're friend,
Brett thank you for your kind words
 
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