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Stuck In The Moment Forever
5 July, 2004
Author: Moonstarshine

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It keeps on
rolling...
life
like the sea waves
surfing smoothly
sometimes rough..
bashing itself
against the rocks
of our calm thoughts
breaking the silence
of bliss.
So lost we were
sailing in the arms of love
where time meant nothing
just you and I
snuggled together.
If only the winds
wraps us
into that one gentle
wave
which takes us far away
leaving us in a lasting
moment
where I embrace you
once more
touch you
feel you
be with you
and
stay in the moment
forever.

------- Author's Notes -------

some moments
feel like eternity.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.14) -- Monday, July 12 2004, 10:27 pm

this is absolutely timeless

to stop time for an eternity w/your main squeeze is a time worth living and embracing over and over...excellent choice of everlasting words..
i admire your work.
nikki (195.93.33.14) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 03:07 am

so amazing

what a beautiful thought,my mind wanderd through fond memories of a beautiful moment in time i shall never forget,
 
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