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If I Could I Would
Author: Terrie*

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if I could yell
my love for you
across the Sky

my echo you'd hear
as It repeated itself
and came back
with your love to me

if I could close my eyes
and place myself at your side
you'd return us both to me

if I could reach across
the and grab onto every bit of air
that we breath

I'd be able to form every
molecule into the likeness of you
if I could do this and much more

you know I would
and you and I would be enjoying each other
and holding each other so tight
startin' tonight

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.97.7) -- Tuesday, July 6 2004, 03:27 pm

at your side

To be in this dream, To be in you're arms true, I know that together our love would grow, Terrie you are such an insperation
Terrie* (65.148.207.26) -- Wednesday, July 7 2004, 02:40 am

Clive,

i welcome you into any of my dreams so you can feel love as i do.. thanx ... your one special man whom always seems to enjoy my poems seems like i should consider writing them all to you :)
brandy (66.157.33.216) -- Tuesday, September 21 2004, 11:48 pm

Terrie

hey i love ur poem i kinda feel that way cause my love is many miles away . ur poem is AWSOME!
Terrie* (65.148.230.155) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 03:56 am

Brandy,

Thanx....isn't love awesome? to feel their presence through their absence?
 
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