Who is this gurl without a face
To whom my heart has given a special place
Shes in my dreams every night
but wen i awake shes nowhere in sight
she puts a smile on my face
and makes my heart race
Her sweet voice warms my heart
I hate waking up,having to part
Her face is what i must see
Tha face of tha gurl that makes me so happy
I caressed her face, looked her right in tha eye
Wiped away tha tear an told her theres no reason to cry
She smiled and drifted away
Time to wake up, is all she could say
I awoke kinda sad
But i remembered her face and it made me glad
Except i really dont know wut to do
Tha gurl in my dreams was....Is YOU...
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 06:53 pm|
H.E.L.L.O FoRsAkEn! You must've had an incredible, dream.... I can envision a princess, whispering sweetnothings into your ear, as your smile widens.... Very good writing!
Such creativity, no one can measure!
|ForSaKen (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, July 11 2004, 02:54 pm|
hehe thank you meridian...coment lyke yours make me want to write more....
|xx (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 02:02 am|
dreams of sweet loved ones great i love it
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