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Your Gone!
Author: Crush Me

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I dont understand.. why do i feel like this? Your gone i should not feel so stressed, you shouldnt still be controlling me.. I shouldnt be the little doll you played with.. but im still so stuck in this.. and your still making my life so in order,I dont feel like im controlling myself.
I know that im better off,
yet you still around,
im happy now,
your still yelling now,
It just shouldnt be like this, I cant understand why, why its just the same. Is there anything worth living for? I do know that this will stop! it needs to end, either your my friend or nothing. Why dont you understand that were not together? why dont you get it that i now controll myself, dont you see you dont belong to me? Cant you tell that its over now? I cant go on like this, it isnt fair to me the way that your still playing your games. well wake up and relize, that this girl you onced love is gone, and your to blame! You pushed me away!

------- Author's Notes -------

Just a little true story!
thanks to everyone who write comments!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 07:06 pm

The Crusher

Crush me, you crushed this poem!! This was Fabulous girl! Letting him know, it's finished, no more him and you, no more drama period.... Your stress and anxiety is greatly expressed through this tremendous piece of writing!

Fabulous, just fabulous!
Smiles,
Meridian
Crush me (141.158.183.223) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 07:11 pm

thanks Meridian!

aww sweetie! thanks so much! im really glad u liked this, yea i think he got the picture now! haha girl uur poems are great too... thanks so much!
 
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