Author: FoRsAkEn


Ur a lil nerdy...buts still kewl
cuz wen you smile you make guyz drool
Ur sumone filled with such vigor,passion,grace
all of this and a pretty kute face...
UR a gurl with dreams and wishes
the type who won't spend her lyfe doin dishes
Ur gonna go places,see thingz sum people can onlee dream of
Ur sumone filled with compassion and love
Ur kewl and fun to be near
Hehe i bet your wonderin if all of this is sincere
well, ALl of this is tru
these are tha thingz i see in you
All of this and so much more
U've become one of tha people i truly adore
But you gotta hav a lil more fun
whether its goin out or juss laying in tha sun
Cuz gurlz lyke you onlee come once in a while
I mean to go through so much and still put on a great smile
U deserve so much outta lyfe
Not juss to grow up and become sum guys wife
Now that you knoe wut i see in you
all thats left to say is... LUV YOU


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Monday, July 12 2004, 10:47 pm

Ain't that sweet?

Suzie and FoRsAkEn.......FoRsAkEn and Suzie....
I love you, you love me, we're a happy family! Wonderful way of describing the way you feel from the inside... Just a-pouring your heart, soul and feelings out!!

Coolie High!
Nice floetry FoRsAkEn!!
ForSaKEn ( -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 02:10 pm

juss a friend

hey Meridian...hehe its good to hear from you...ohh hehe i guess i shoulda mentioned it sumwhere...buh suzies juss a good friend..she my doctor sorta...hehe buh still thanks for your comments i really enjoy them
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