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12 Questions
Author: Bizza

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You say you are going to change,
But how do I know if it's true?
Everything just seems so strange,
Everytime I am with you.

I can't see you change for me,
I can't see you do the things that you say.
You say "Just wait you'll see,"
"I will have your heart one day."

But I just don't see it happening,
Because I just feel it in my heart.
What are you willing to do to prove,
That you are serious enough to start?

To change yourself for someone,
To prove your love is true.
What are the things you are so willing to do?

Are you going to stop your lieing,?
That's getting way out of control.
Are you going to stop your fake crying,?
It's not taking any toll.

Are you going to control your temper,
So you dont blow up at me?
Are you going to hold me in contempt,
So your temper I will again see.?

Are you going to yell at me for the stupid things?
And make nothing into a big deal?
You know the consequences that will bring,
Just please show me how you really feel.

You show many mixed signals,
That I dont understand.
How do I know where this realationship will stand?

Please show me how you feel,
So I know if this love you feel is real.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, July 12 2004, 03:38 am

B girl

Hiya Bizza!!! 12 Questions! Counted everyone! So he's having multiple personalities, and he's not giving you his whole heart eh? Beautifully written and described!!!

Nobody can touch you girl! You write so fine!
Take care!
Smiles,
Meridian
Bizza (4.165.195.216) -- Monday, July 12 2004, 07:12 pm

Thanks

Hey Meridian, I just couldnt take all his yelling, and screaming when I didnt do anything wrong. Or all his lieing. It was never ending. And he had said he would grow up and last night he blew up instead. Thanks for you comment.
 
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