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There's Still Room For You
Author: Ben Laney

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Go on Darlin'
hold him in your arms
And tell yourself
that you're safe and warm
But if it turns out
he's not all that he seems
There's still room for you
here inside my dreams

Be his lady
And say he's your man
Call him Baby
As long as you can
But should those pastures
ever lose their sheen
There's still room for you
here inside my dreams

All this love in me
hasn't gone away
I still want to be
close beside you someday
So please bear me in mind
if ever you're free
'Cause there's still room for you
here inside my dreams

------- Author's Notes -------

Dedicated to all those who have watched someone they love throw it all away and turn to some worthless, no good, coniving, &#%*@!#% !!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 08:06 pm

room eh?

LOL! Hey BL! Just the right dedication, for those who are in that predicament.... Letting them know, that you have all the room in the world, for them....

Some people do tend to mess up, when choosing someone else...
Great one!
Smiles,
Meridian
LinzAy (68.50.131.27) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 09:46 pm

been there!

Hey! I've definitely been here! One of my exes left me bc my cousin moved in on him while we were dating....if she could do that family i was convinced she would hurt him and i cared about him too much to see him get hurt...they're still together tho..amazingly.....guess i was wrong...but that was my view a while ago
Ben Laney (65.148.212.247) -- Wednesday, July 14 2004, 08:33 am

Meridian, Thank you for your....

Meridian, Thank you for your positive comment. I am happy you like this one, and I appreciate the encouraging words! Yes indeed, some do mess up when choosing someone else. We all make mistakes.
Thanks again!

Kind Regards,
Ben
Ben Laney (65.148.212.247) -- Wednesday, July 14 2004, 09:01 am

Thank you, LinzAy, for...

Thank you, LinzAy, for your comment on There's Still Room For You. I appreciate your taking the time, and I'm glad you could relate to it!

Kind Regards,
Ben
Stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 05:45 am

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Is she blind? you're a sweetheart Ben.
Once again.. another excellent poem
-Stace
Ben Laney (65.148.230.154) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 06:28 am

Stacey, That's it!! The girl is....

Stacey, That's it!! You are right, of course. The girl is B-L-I-N-D and just does not have a clue at all!! I only wish you had been there to set her straight. Haa Haaaa!
Thank you sooooo much for seeing that, and for calling me a sweetheart...I am glad you like this one!

Best Regards,
Ben
Terrie* (69.19.174.208) -- Saturday, August 6 2005, 05:15 pm

Love always makes room..

Hi Ben, i got to thinkin' of you, as i always do.went back to see if there was anything i didn't read, this one pulled me back, guess we always save the best for last, thanx for sharin'your words that are so carin' just so you'll know someone misses you so...
Ben Laney (65.136.24.81) -- Wednesday, September 21 2005, 09:20 pm

Terrie* I think the biggest room is..

Terrie* I think the biggest room we all need is the room for improvement, huuuuuh? I thank you for reading and commenting on this one. Sorry it took so long...I just noticed today.
 
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