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My Inside Screams!
17 July, 2004
Author: Crush Me

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The new one i called you, i was sure it was good to be true, Somehow you would hurt me through the lies, you got caught in them and continue to tell them. Dont you see that your hurting me, last nite was awesome spending time with you, but now tonite you say i dont want anything to do with you, because your with your friends..Tomorrow you made a date with me to spend the nite together, whats going on. You say one thing then change to another... im sick of you making me feel like i shouldnt be upset and cry! its my life dont tell me, you crushing me, im falling for you, will you catch me or let me fall?

------- Author's Notes -------

this poem goes along with "the new one"

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bubbles (72.95.128.19) -- Saturday, November 22 2008, 11:26 pm

Ehh.

Ehh, I love it. Why? Because it reminds me exactly what I did to someone. Damn. And you know what? I still like him so much. I don't deserve him. He's too amazing. I should have known..

Excellent job. (:
 
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