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You Of All People
19 July, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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One night out has shown your true
colours,
you knew the situation,
you knew I loved her,

But your anatomy controls you mind,
ringing me up next day gloating
thinking I would be fine,

I introduced you to my friends
gave you a life,
but you slept with her!!!
you might aswell of told me to turn around
then used the knife!

So I suppose you two suit each other
seems you both like watching people suffer

The thing I dont get is you already have a girlfriend,
who treats you like a king,
a young girl who looks up to you,
thinks your the best,
you had sex with sally
do you think she would ever guess??

probably not,
Adam you insensitive person,
I hope you rot!!

Im not going to tell her what happened friday night,
Im not going to hit you
I dont fight,

Im going to sit back and watch you self destruct,
for you adam,
theres no more love!!

------- Author's Notes -------

It was very hard writing this as it did happen on friday night,ive known him for six years,and he knew nobody at all,
so intrduced him to my friends,
now they have all turned against me,
apparently im in the wrong!
dont know where!
and the rot part might sound a bit harsh but i truly mean it.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 03:21 am

nutty buddy!

LOL! Ben! Eh there! Yeah, don't ya hate it when someone in whom you trusted, and formed a strong, unbreakable friendship bond with them for years, and all of a sudden, betrays you out of the blue.... I know you were fit to be tired.... Don't stress yourself too much Hushy! Take care, and relax your mind Benny (lol)!

Smiles,
Meridian

P.S. Terrific poem Ben!
ben (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 12:38 pm

wish i

hi meri,
you know i really wish i didnt have to write this but it had to be done,it was the only way to get it off my chest

thanks for the comment
love
ben
barb (209.112.22.10) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 03:41 pm

feel the pain then move on

oh ben I'm sorry for your pain. but just know that you did nothing wrong, you were kind and loving. You deserve better treatment than that.Some people feel really important if they are jerks.
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 06:58 pm

yeah

hi barb,hows you>?yeah your so right about people being jerks,but what comes around goes around hey!thanks barb!
Hushy
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