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Starry Eyed Little Girl
Author: Ben Laney

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Baby blues
with a silver shine
Swinging golden pony-tail
Sweet lovely daughter of mine
You make diamonds seem pale

My Starry eyed little girl
Go ahead, dance and twirl
Jump the clouds
in your rainbow boots
Spin your skirt
like a parachute
Whoah, oh, oh
You're gliding above the world
My Starry eyed little girl

Look at you
so light on your feet
You're full of grace and style
You bring such
happiness to me
You make your Daddy smile!

My Starry eyed little girl
Go ahead, dance and twirl
Jump the clouds
in your rainbow boots
Spin your skirt
like a parachute
Whoah, oh, oh
You're gliding above the world
My Starry eyed little girl

------- Author's Notes -------

This was inspired by my dancing daughter, Dylan. She really was gliding above the world somehow. It was very special to me to watch her spin and turn! I hope you like it!***Ben

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 04:18 pm

aww

So precious so sweet.... Dylan and Angel Laney will be proud to read this one, and the whole Laney family! This is great dedicating this to Dylan.... Real good Ben! Smiles, Meridian
Ben Laney (65.135.87.244) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 06:50 pm

Meridian, Thank you for your....

Meridian, Thank you for your encouraging comment on Starry Eyed Little Girl, I am pleased to know you like it. And, yes, I hope Dylan likes it, too! Best Regards & smiles, too, Ben
Martin Vann (63.185.64.157) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 05:02 pm

She sprinkles, Star Dust, All Over The world

Ben, I see, your baby girl, kicking up, star dust all over the world, good thing, her heart is big enough, to cover all that real estate. I see her move, like, summer clouds, yet, I know, there is living..., thunder in her heart and when we hear that roar, we all know, it just applause, coming from her daddy's heart, as he watches her, sprinkle, star dust all over the world. Still, we all know, in her heart, she dances..., for her dad. Your a lucky man, my brother Ben. Your other brother, who understands, MartinV
Ben Laney (65.150.170.14) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 10:07 pm

Martin, a beautiful ball of energy...

Martin you are correct.. she is a beautiful ball of energy with the ability to shake up some major star dust and sprinkle smiles all around. I am a fortunate man to have her as a daughter, yes indeed. Thank you soooo much, my T-Town Amigo for your poetic and encouraging words...they are greatly appreciated! Love & Whirled Peas, Ben
Dylan (66.52.139.67) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 04:45 am

I Love You Dad!

Dad,
Thank you so much for writing such a sweet poem for me. I'm sitting here in tears, just so touched by it. I don't know if you realize this, but when you write about me in such a way, it really touches my heart. I miss you so much and I love you! Keep up the amazing writing! Bye!
Ben Laney (68.127.173.253) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 02:59 pm

Dylan, okay I will change the title to....

Dylan, okay I will change the title to My Teary-Eyed Little Girl...Haaaa! Haaaaa! Haaaaa! No, all the credit for this one I owe to being inspired by you being you being you. However, I do thank you very much for your comment, I appreciate it soooooo much. I am happy to know you are touched by this one. I miss you more and love you more! Love, Dad
Leah (204.112.162.138) -- Friday, July 22 2005, 06:18 am

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sweet poem ben! keep writing....
Ben Laney (65.138.97.232) -- Saturday, August 13 2005, 04:04 am

Leah, I started to write and.......

Leah, Thank you a big,, big bunch for your "sweet" comment on Starry Eyed Little girl...I really do appreciate it a lot. What happenened is , I started to write and I can't stop now with all of my might. Everywhere I look I see poetry and songs! You keep writing, too, and I am happy to hear your encouraging words.
 
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