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Violet
Author: Demon_99

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Cold sweat, nuerotic angst
Dreams of you everynight
I see the fire deep withing your eyes
Watching you cry kills me a little each time
The day i found you, i should have died
Torturing you makes me feel alive
I was taken in by your lies
Now when i hear your name its despise
Loving you, where was my crime?
You cut my wrist, and watch me bleed dry
I'm sure you imagined my surprise
Losing you, made me cry inside
In death i am finally alive!
The worst day of my life, was the day i met you

------- Author's Notes -------

The woman that made my numb to the world.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 10:13 pm

Mmmh

When you thought it couldn't get any worse, you were in for a surprise eh? Man, o man, you seem really upset, when you got to REALLY know her.... Once again, the WAY you write, is very inspiring....

Please write a part 2! LOL!
Take care!
Smiles,
Meridian
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 12:08 am

Thank You

I will prolly work on a second part as a follow up. Might take a lil time though, been depressed lately, so its hard to find the good in things, thank you for the comments and kind words though.
~Demon~
 
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