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I Wont Be In School Today
19 July, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Not another day!
The bullies are going to be there,
same place,
same time,
no matter how hard I hide,
me,
they always manage to find,

Ive done nothing to them except
be intelligent,
The fact Im a nice person is
irrelevant,

Yesterday they stole my bag,
I suppose they were looking for some money for some fags,
There was no money in it
but still they burnt it,
they take what they want
they never earn it,

Today Ive taken some pills,
Its time to see how
heaven
feels

------- Author's Notes -------

as you know this goes on everday, bullying needs to be stamped out and soon, it can mould you into the person you are today and thats not fair.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (209.112.24.179) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 01:27 am

no it isn't right

Please don't let them win and by taking pills and doing other stuff to hurt yourself is letting them win. Iii can't give you advice on how to handle it. Just hang in their and next time they want your back pack give it to them don't put up a fight for it maybee they enjoy the trouble , If ou make things easy for them, maybee they'll leave you alone the saying Kill them with kindness might work. you are talented and smart don't let them change you
hi (80.6.138.109) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 09:47 am

Barb,...

hi barb,thanks for the comment,this is not about me,im 21,and if they tried stealing my bag i would give them a whack!!its just about bullying in general and how it needs to be stoped,which i cant see it being stoped as you always have that one bunch of kids in every school who like to challange you. take care barb. ben x
barb (209.112.24.179) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 12:30 pm

glad it's not you

oops misunderstood again. But it nice that someone sees what is going on with others. Nice work see you had me believing, and that's what you want is having people believe your writing.
Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 03:57 pm

LOL Barb

thanks again barb,hope you have a really nice day, much love ben
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 08:50 pm

TV

Hey old buddy, old pal! "I won't be in school today" reminds me of Oprah, Maury Provich, Montel Williams, Dr. Phill and others, who have programs about bullies.... A lot of people have committed suicide, do to bullying, so they wouldn't face a lot of immature kids everyday.... Some were beat up, for no reason, some were picked on about their appearance, and etc.... It's really sad how bullies make it hard for the good ones.... Nice, true writing! As always, smiles, Meridian
Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 10:34 pm

Meri

hello M,yep it goes on all the time and theres no need for it,I think the people that do it are insecure within there selfs, thanks for the comment mate love ben x
Terrie* (65.135.86.190) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 02:21 am

Ben/Hushy, your in depth in your..

writing tells me that you too have seen the worst in situations .. 'm reminded of the many tears i had to dry..i put my self in a situation many years back that opened up my eyes to things that i never really paid any attention to.i was provided /w a comfortable little world. i became a child advocate..thats how my best friend and i stayed so close over the years..he was a victim of such abuse. i have had many sleepless nights when i carried a pager to be somewhere whether it was for a rape victim or a child that was beaten up..yes it is a horrendous situation..and yes it can mold a person of whom they are today.. many children need a voice to help them the sad thing is that things like this goes to far and we end up w/a casualty many suffer in silence..i give you a standing ovation for bringing this to the attention of our hearts..hugs/love
Ben (80.6.138.109) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 09:24 am

Terrie*

hi Terrie* Im sorry about your friend who was a victim of mindless fools,and thank you for your comment as they always keep me going, take care friend much love ben x
Terrie* (65.148.230.43) -- Thursday, July 22 2004, 11:11 pm

Ben/Hushy,

yea my bud learned life the hard way his goal and passion was to prevent any child from becoming a victim, he didn't go for fortune for himself , lord knows he could of..instead he went for fortune in saving a childrens innocent lives..as a counselor he had to intervene in a brutal beating for the 7 year old son of the very guy whom bullied the cra* out of him..yes twist of fate and the mysteries of life .. as i've said b-4 your writing is tops!! do not change your style..
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Friday, July 23 2004, 10:53 am

strange..

yep its strange how life goes sometimes, take care -ben
aimee aka bubz (202.89.42.31) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 09:21 am

ben

hey ben im only in yr10 and go to a christain school its a private school and is really good!!! we have no hard oput bullies at our school and everything is pretty much perfect but i do see kids picking on others kids at our school and i can see how badly it hurts them!!!words really do hurt!!!im glad i go to this school as a friend of mine got really badlly bullied at her school and the teachers didnt care which i think is reallyreally bad-i thought older ppl where meant to look out for you!!!well anyway soz 4 going on but yea awesome poem - really like it!!!
luv aimz xo
Ben f (81.100.175.39) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 01:21 pm

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hey aimee,I hope your friends sorted the problem out.you said theres not much bullying in your school,but dont you find theres always just one who spoils it for the rest.
I dont hate bullies,deep down they have problems that maybe we will never find out about,
insucureities about there selfs maybe.

but like yopu said you would expect the teachers to do something..if you can run to them,who can you run to?
thanks for reading aimee,and have a lovely day.
Ben
x
 
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