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Whole Heart
Author: Crush Me

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Have you ever felt like you didnt have a friend in the world? like there is no one there, no shoulder to cry on, no one to fall back on when you are having trouble, no one to trust when you need it. I literally have hardly any friends, i could prolly count them, the ones that consider me a true friend, on my one hand. Maybe its because im a heartless girl, or maybe im just not friend material, maybe its because im not nice enough. Maybe its because im a complete screw up, or maybe its because i put my whole heart, all my heart into one thing that probably wont go anywhere...

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Just a fiction poem.. but it took my a while to put myself in the other person's place. and i could really think about how that would feel.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 07:16 pm

reality, it is

Crush me! Crush me! Feeling in despair? Feeling like no one cares? Feeling down? Feels like no ones around? Feeling lost? Feeling blue? Seems like nothings working out for you? Don't let go of the rope, you just keep on holding on, things will defintely get better..... Hold on girl! You can make it! I need to say that to myself as well! Hahhaha.... Nice fiction-reality poem there! I felt that one! Smiles, Meridian
Sarah Lovely (80.6.138.109) -- Saturday, July 31 2004, 08:34 pm

i know what you mean

Actually i don't know what you mean, i'm the most popular person in school and i have 28 friends that love me so your poem means nothing to me supppsoe. Life sure is strange huh!!
barb (209.112.22.238) -- Monday, August 2 2004, 01:19 am

confused Sarah

I think this is a beautiful written poem. and sarah you are lucky you don't understand where people that have this problem are saying or feeling. Good for you that you're so popular.Most of us are lucky to have one person like us. Anyways good writing crush me.
 
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